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    Default Critique a promo for a mma promo

    Hey guys i am promoting a local MMA show let me know what you think of the video and give me any advice on how to improve it.

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    I dug the promo. I have a film and broadcast degree (not that that means shit, b/c I am in education now). If I had one critique it would be that I would have put something in early about what happened during the first fight. Maybe had the fighter who lost say something. Very entertaining promo. There was also one cut in the beginning that used the same camera. It was a cut from the fight. I realize it was probably the only camera shot, but maybe you could have put an interview between it.

    Overall good promo.

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    Really good stuff actually.

    If you want I can come out there and fight your brother for free.

    Haha j/k

    Good stuff man, keep it up. How did you get into the promoting business?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sakara=Excitement View Post
    Really good stuff actually.

    If you want I can come out there and fight your brother for free.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MIZJUDOZOU View Post
    I dug the promo. I have a film and broadcast degree (not that that means shit, b/c I am in education now).

    Overall good promo.
    Damn i'm starting a film and t.v degree in September!!

    And Sakara the guys funding the event seen a article i wrote and emailed me and asked me to a meeting.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sakara=Excitement View Post
    On a side note, we should totally have a MMANews.com/forums throwdown. I got dibs on Roaddawg.
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    When the guy got knocked out in the video, the man filming it was screaming like Stann Marsh's dad from SouthPark; that shit had me laughing so hard.
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